Comments : Between The Miles......

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love love this poem:)

    If you turn outside,
    in the wetness,
    I'll become the rain.
    An upon your forehead, kiss you.

    This is my favorite stanza
    5/5 from me:)

  • 6 years ago

    by WAY2LOVE

    Beautiful poem, i like it

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beautiful poem..5/5 from me too..

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I can visualize a girl sitting in the dumps but looks to the stars and know that even while apart ur still their at heart :) and i can see how much u want this person to know that ur there :) i love love loved the poem everything was great and fantastic
    absolutely fantastic :) :) 20 stars 5/5 :):)
    My fav parts :
    I'll become the rain.
    An upon your forehead, kiss you.

    If you free the air,
    in the light of day,
    I'll become the sun.
    And smile for you.

    If your eye's upon the stars,
    in the crystalline darkness,
    I'll become the moon.
    And the light shall guide you.

    If you rest upon the ground,
    in the warmth,
    I'll become the grass.
    And embrace you.

    In the minds eye,
    I'm not so far away.

    just sense me and I'll be there.

    - I know it's practically ur whole poem but i loved every little bit :) :) :) :)