Comments : Every Passing Day

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your poems have depth bro. I'm surprised you aren't flooded with comments. I'm adding you to favs. Excellent wording

  • 12 years ago

    by xx stacy xx

    Kris... is that u

  • 12 years ago

    by xx stacy xx

    Kris... is that u

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Another GREAT write,I like your style of writing, it makes the reader drawn to the words as if they were "seeing" it happen.

    Favorite lines:
    "Fear arises as she starts refusing to trust,
    Her hope shatters as her heart begins to turn into dust."

    Love it!!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Erion

    I added this one to my favorites!

  • 12 years ago

    by Susan Hendra

    Beautiful and deep. Right through from the heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is great as all the rest. :) your such a perfect writer. no matter what its about they're a;ways great :) your awesome