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Aw, i know how this is.
Holding hands, you would whisper
"Baby, I'm still not close enough"
You held onto my arm so close
Whispering, "You're mine, hot stuff"
It flowed perfectly, the emotion poured out. How close yall were & never expecting it to turn out like this.
Great Job (:
This is awesome. I agree with the above about that specific stanza being cute, and about the flow. The story was nice and most people can relate to it. Excellent piece, amazing job