Aw, i know how this is.
Loved it.

Holding hands, you would whisper
"Baby, I'm still not close enough"
You held onto my arm so close
Whispering, "You're mine, hot stuff"
-so cute(:

It flowed perfectly, the emotion poured out. How close yall were & never expecting it to turn out like this.
Great Job (:
5/5

This is awesome. I agree with the above about that specific stanza being cute, and about the flow. The story was nice and most people can relate to it. Excellent piece, amazing job