Comments : Stuck in the Past

  • 6 years ago

    by Reaper

    I know tht feeling :) good job! 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    "I was nothing to you all along
    You won't see me shed a tear
    But that doesn't mean I'm strong
    The butterflies left my stomach
    My breath was returned"

    You penned the perfect break-up poem, it screams of all the injustice that one goes through , the levels of pain and frustration. I have to say this is the best I have ever read.."Bravo" on your brilliance

  • 6 years ago

    by Tori

    This is really good:)

  • 6 years ago

    by David Longe

    Very good, was a great read that I can relate to. =)

  • 6 years ago

    by Alyssa Arce GossamerRhyannon

    Absolutely beautiful, i love your writing

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    You can tell that you Absolutely put 100% into this poem. Its a really strong write. I loved your flow and how you kept the reader hanging in there.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by smashley13

    I love this. I relate to it so well! Your writing is amazing. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Omar

    This is one fine piece of work. Love the flow of the poem. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    Wow this is really good my favorite line was ... " just your favorite mistake" that was really good 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Sad read here ;(