@_@ OMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG !!!
I pictured the whole thing infront of me !!!
And it just killed me, its like stabbing someone straight in their heart. It fekt real, so real, and the ending was just so, AAAAAAAHHHHH :(
Greatly amazingly written piece ..
5/5 and a sad face ..
Wow!!! I knew a bad ending was coming but it was just so heartbreaking and sad.... But I loved how you told this story... and described every sweet moment, getting everything ready, it was just so romantic and sweet! And the ending was just terrible, as in what the girl said! Made me so upset!!! (I hope this didn't actually happen!!!) Great poem though my friend! 5/5
I totally wasn't expecting that ending!!! i was reading the whole thing smiling at how cute everything was and how lucky that girl must be and then it ends so sadly :( i'm sorry if this is really true but the poem was awesome i loved it!!!