@_@ OMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG !!!
I pictured the whole thing infront of me !!!
And it just killed me, its like stabbing someone straight in their heart. It fekt real, so real, and the ending was just so, AAAAAAAHHHHH :(

Greatly amazingly written piece ..
5/5 and a sad face ..

You have penned a magnificent piece. It is filled with emotion, but the tone changes so quickly at the end. The word choice is simple as is the flow, but both are terrific. Outstanding job, yet again.

JEEEESUS! :( i'm sorry if its your genuine story
but anyways superbly written i loved the way you've described the whole scene....:)

Wow.
i LOVE this poem.

Such heartbreaking at the end. Wanting to spend your life with her & getting the worst phonecall. Emotion spills out of this, it flowed so perfectly.
Love it
5/5

Wow!!! I knew a bad ending was coming but it was just so heartbreaking and sad.... But I loved how you told this story... and described every sweet moment, getting everything ready, it was just so romantic and sweet! And the ending was just terrible, as in what the girl said! Made me so upset!!! (I hope this didn't actually happen!!!) Great poem though my friend! 5/5

I totally wasn't expecting that ending!!! i was reading the whole thing smiling at how cute everything was and how lucky that girl must be and then it ends so sadly :( i'm sorry if this is really true but the poem was awesome i loved it!!!

5/5

Wow, That was so sad at the end :( that was soo unexpected and it ended horribly..

Wow, u r such an amazing writer..d more i am readin ur poetry ,d more i am becomin a fan of urs..excellent piece of work..5/5

That's a bummer -_-
But made a great poem! Seriously well written. The ending couldn't be more perfect. Great job!

It is amazing but the heart breaking part is so fast u shud make it little large i mean u ended d poem a little bit early...

Aw Ouch!
I lost the feeling though towards the end. still very emotional

Nicely written 4/5