Wow... this deffinatly has story and emotion. It is crazy good but wow. It left an impression on me and it had a lot going on in it. There is story, flow, rhyme, excellent word choice, and emotion is more than abundant. Whatever inspired this I repeat wow. Anyway terrific job 5/5

Wow. The pain he feels is overwhelming. Wanting nothing more then to get the approval of his mom & getting nothing but silence. Trying so hard to prove to her hes changed & grown up into this man.

Needing her in his life, to know that hes okay now, wanting her to be proud. I love this poem. The emotion is outstanding, it flows perfectly drawing you in wanting to make read more.

Great Job, But they always are :)
5/5

Wow am I sensitive right now I think I have tears in my eyes,,, this is very dashing and hit my heart like a lighting bolt,fast and hard, like wow very good poem the emotion was definitely felt and you did terrific again, I loved this poem and sad, great read, sorry muches if it's true,,,10/10