Comments : Curse Your Name

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Memories of a past love can steal the things we enjoy in life. The smallest things can trigger that feeling. Nice job on this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You know...this might have been a vent as stated in the title but I felt rage reading it, I felt hurt and sadness . To stir that emotion into another is talent.
    Not only the emotions penned were strong, but done with wording that flowed, and screamed out your thoughts. Excellent just brilliant in my opinion..Nominated

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent Bro. I think I'll just say ditto to what the ladies said. It might have started as a vent but it turned out to be a good poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Epic.. Truely amazing. I am in awe.

    -Love Panda

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Anger?. .not precisely. More of a regret I must say. She has left, the author is heart broken, and still her memories deprive him tranquility. Thus he keeps himself busy to avoid recalling past moments. And the day time noise does not let him have silence, for silence is soothing yet painful. He has a soft corner for her.

  • 6 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    WOW i haven't read a poem this good in a long time. well done 5/5