Very sweet and sappy poem. However please use the spellcheck next time.

I love it! ita raw and honest and open...i love this so much! does she even know you feel this way?

Hello,

A nice piece of prose here. I could feel the intensity of wanting the girl to believe and trust you and more importantly the words written for her.

I like the internal rhyme too and makes the piece a poem. Overall I like the optimism and hope woven throughout and it gifts this piece a light and promise to all that read it and see what is within.

Take care,

Michael