Oh, here is my personality
That used to be so charming
I find it decaying in the grass
Some would find it quite alarming

As I continue walking this path
I find small pieces of my soul
It used to be so loving and caring
But now is filled with a black hole
~ my favorite stanzas but,,,
Thee entire poem was deep and great and amazing so wonderful I could read it over and over again I love love loved it fantastic job :) :) 5/5

What I love the most about this amazing poem is the rhythm, it felt so right.. I was moved especially by :

I can see an object, torn to pieces
Barely moving in the dirt
I gather the pieces and hold it close
And wipe away the blood with my shirt

^ you have created so much beautiful imagery with simple wording and also great scenery that are suspenseful
FIVE

Wow this is my favorite poem of yours.

Brilliant!

You can see you walking down the long path picking up all the broken pieces of what you used to be. You can feel the pain you feel & the hurt that was caused. As you try to walk away putting yourself back together.

It flows wonderful & draws you in to keep reading.

Amazing Job. One of your bests.
5/5

I love it!!! The words make the poem come to life.. it shows deep emotion and a caring heart.!!

message me anytime there friend!!

Great write 5/5 ^_^