Comments : Even these tears won't bring you back...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    People tell me to surround myself with friends
    Make yourself busy and you will see
    That you can make it without her
    But why do I still feel so empty?
    -That empty feeling, horrible. Trying so hard to get ur mind off her when nothing works.

    My pillow is here to feel the tears I cry
    As I wipe my eyes once again
    I will fall asleep with another wet pillow
    Missing my one and only, best friend...
    -I can see this happening :(. You crying so bad your tears are soaked up in the pillow missing them.

    I love this poem<3
    Filled with such deep raw emotion. The pain you feel by losing her is so strong & so hurtful it makes u feel it.

    Penned perfectly(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow great poem but if true I'm sorry you feel this way and I can kinda relate in the moment of now,,,this has touched my heart and you can just visualize as I read each word,,no favorite stanza because it's all so great,,I loved it 5/5