Comments : Finding Release

  • 12 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Great Poem... So captivating... It draws you in with the Vivid Pictures and seduces you with and incredible flow of words... and enjoyable read indeed... 5/5 read my new poem (Letter from Syria)

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Empowerment is the key word here. Self-given strength, found within or reawakened.

    Powerful image that captivates the reader. Love how you easily brush away sexual innuendos to get to the heart of the matter.

    The scene itself hearkens back to the ancient ritual of ablution mixed with a dance of spiritual invocation. Your poem perfectly embodies an Archetype of the first magnitude.