Comments : An opened door

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Aaah sad one :(

    How can I tell you?
    I don't know what to do to make you stay,
    I don't have the strength around you,
    My life is under your sway.

    liked this stanza....however the flow went real smooth

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Profound! I can't say I know or understand how you feel, but I sure could imagine what it feels like.