Comments : You're still the one...

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This is sensational Matt. It seems that you never let go of this person, and you still await for their return.

    Sometimes the waiting part not even knowing if they feel the same or not is really hard. But what I like is that you never give up on people you love, that's just so sweet of you.

    Hope you get what you deserve: and you my friend deserve the best :)

    Oh and this poem reminded me of a song, so check your inbox to know it :)

    SMILE !!

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww this poem is so sweet... I could feel the longing you feel for this person.. and how the love is still there, even if this person is no longer in your life.

    "Your heart still beats my name,
    you are still so in love with me,
    why are you running away,
    when we fit together so perfectly."

    >> love this stanza, it is definitely my favorite part in this poem! it was so romantic and sweet!

    The entire poem was sweet, nostalgic, and heartbreaking as well... and made me think about the nice parts of love, but the sad parts of love as well.

    Well done with this poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Beautiful an lovely it's amazing 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    OMG this is so cute and so sweet. I love it a 5 from me.
    -Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    The last stanza was my favorite... That plead for the person to come back to you is so relateable for so.many people... It really captures the essence of desiring to give someone a second chance; amazing, cupcake.

    5/5

    - Shining Star. :P

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Really good love the heart in it keep up the way you feel