Comments : Dehydration

  • 12 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Awe, such a sweet portrait you have penned! great job in showing the subtle attraction desired by many!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Heavy

    -Jaw drops- That is Heavy, Maple. Wow. Deep and Heart-felt, Insightful and impacting. You display your love intensely through your poetry, definitely this one! I really like this. It's dramatic and I like how you used creative symbolism!

    5/5