Comments : Beautiful Beginning

  • 5 years ago

    by abuzubayr

    How in the world do you write so well, amazing mashallah

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Everyone started the way you started and learns as he/she grows. Thanks for the comment, stay blessed.

  • 5 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A beautiful piece,, somehow I felt the depth of the moment. I've never had a child or been around them much. Idk exactly what to say this poem left me speechless..Excellent

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks so much TJ, am grateful. I understand what you mean. Its natural for most ladies to imagine writing anything to do with child bearing. :-) ...

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    This poem is very lovely. I love how you wrote about a newborn, and the joy children bring to our lives. I love kids, so this poem really touched me and made me feel happy and I hope to have kids of my own one day! It also made me appreciate my mom <3

    Your descriptions were like a breath of fresh air. I really enjoyed this poem.

    Well done =)

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks dear, mothers are the backbone in every family. I believe any lady will appreciate her mother, the more, after experiencing the joys and pains attached to it. I'm grateful for your comment, ;-) ..