Wow. I can see all of this so vividly and its amazing.i think that word choice and painting images really are your strengths, because those are the things that always catch my eye with your work

Paintrd beautiful images that made me smell the fragance of blooming flowers and hearing the sounds an old truck bumping down the road.. Amazing job.

5/5

-Heather

Beautiful imagery /picture of home that distinghes a house from 'home'.the 'dirt road' is contrasted with the 'yellow daisies' -the beauty of nature emphasize the sweetness of home. Well done !

Oh wow,

This poem is so beautiful. I never read what it was like before you have made the edits to it but I absolutely love what you have written here.

I find that it is so amazing how our sens of smell can heighten our other senses. It brings back memories, can make us feel sick and yes even make us feel at home.

Everytime I drive passed my old primary school there is a certain smell and when it hits me it brings me back to the days. Reminds me what it was like then.

You have really painted this picture so well. I love the metaphors and the images are spectaular. I love the part where you drive on the dirt road and the wildflowers bend in your passing. Fantastic.

Well done with this poem TJ. I love the way it has made me feel when reading it

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This isnt exactly about home or just a specific array of memories.

Its about the journey from work to home or any other starting point to home. Its about enjoying the view on the way to home. Its about the author describing his enthusiasm towards life. Mentioning the ambiance of life along the path to home.

And the last two paras partly speak of life itself. Dark clouds and rain could indicate the bad/dark/sorrowful days. And just like the dark clouds gave way to a clear sky, the bad days will make way for the good days to come.

Dude, you wrote a poem about driving back home. And the detail is astounding.

Very well written bro.

This sounds like some sort of country song... like Miranda Lambert's song (The House That Built Me) or Blake Shelton's... I can't decide.

I like the scenery you've drawn at first describing spacial-ly the many aspects of the country side. lovely!

This was painted beautifully with many delightful colors and a warming embrace embed into each word. Also fantastic imagery and great wording. I loved it and excellently written. A very wonderful poem from amazing you as always. There's a soft gentle grace that swirls the reader as they invision this and feel the calming of wilderness and the calming to their soul,,magnificent job :) 5/5

This poem was a delight to read! It really was like a breath of fresh air. I love the imagery your create, especially with nature. There's something beautiful in your metaphors.

I love this part:
"winds share secrets as they sway and
whisper softly from one to another."
>> love the idea of the wind sharing secrets!

And I love "Home sweet home" in the end.

Great job!

There is something about your home that reminds me of my own. I think those of that live in the country are spoiled to the fact at the beautiful nature that surrounds us. I love nature poems and yours has truly found a spot amongst my favorite. Thanks for the read.