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I swear you're doing this on purpose
this is really good there is alot of emotion throughout the entire thing i love it :)
by Imperfectly Writing On The Walls
That was just.... Well.. I don't have a word... It left me speechless from the power of the sadness.
- Shining Star!
by lost angel
by Innocent Fairy
Another tear rolls down my cheek,
another sleepless night tonight,
I can't let you know all of this though,
so I hold it in with all my might.
^^ I love this and I so get these moments
with you, life seemed so simple
^ love this too and I relate and how that person makes ur world go round
I can't tell you how I feel,
it hurts to have to keep it in,
I really wish you could see,
all of this love I have within.
^^ I really like this stanza and ur entire poem is fantastic and really reaches within the reader and I can relate to every single lil bit u wrote
Right now we are talking again
and I really don't want that to end,
so I will cherish the moments I do have,
even if I have to just call you a friend...
^^ this is my most favorite and really reaches out to me more,,u have amazingly written this piece and has fantastic rhyme,,u did a really great job I loved it 5/5