Comments : Wishing for more...

  • 6 years ago

    by Angel

    I swear you're doing this on purpose
    this is really good there is alot of emotion throughout the entire thing i love it :)

  • Wow... Cupcake...
    That was just.... Well.. I don't have a word... It left me speechless from the power of the sadness.


    - Shining Star!

  • 6 years ago

    by lost angel


    enough said.
    ~lost angel

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Another tear rolls down my cheek,
    another sleepless night tonight,
    I can't let you know all of this though,
    so I hold it in with all my might.

    ^^ I love this and I so get these moments

    with you, life seemed so simple

    ^ love this too and I relate and how that person makes ur world go round

    I can't tell you how I feel,
    it hurts to have to keep it in,
    I really wish you could see,
    all of this love I have within.

    ^^ I really like this stanza and ur entire poem is fantastic and really reaches within the reader and I can relate to every single lil bit u wrote

    Right now we are talking again
    and I really don't want that to end,
    so I will cherish the moments I do have,
    even if I have to just call you a friend...

    ^^ this is my most favorite and really reaches out to me more,,u have amazingly written this piece and has fantastic rhyme,,u did a really great job I loved it 5/5