Comments : I never knew you

  • Oh this is just heartbreaking!!

    I think you described an older brother you were too young or never were able to meet because of illness..?

    Just one thing:

    'I've waited for answers that never come'

    ^^ I think for this piece 'come' should be 'came'
    It just sounds slightly awkward otherwise.. Hmmm

    Another really great write!

    5/5