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by The Poet Behind The Poems
This was a really good idea most people dont realise how many are willing to take there own life
Someone has to help them get through,
and to help them.
The line above you used help them twice
you could of said ...
someone has to help them get through,
There pain and suffering
you could write it diffrently like ...
The pain is taking control
someone needs to help before
Its too late
Keep writing :-)