Strong, provokes images.

some suggestions,
(You can ignore if you like)

Hopelessly instead of hopeless?

Drop "the" before pain on the wrist line.
Commas after every line apart from the last.

If you put ! after her it almost makes you shout the first line, which almost explains your anguish, Which then ties in with the rest of the poem.

Like I said, just suggestions.

Thanks for the read.

Darren