Looting the Void

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 5, 2012


Pale shadows fall on spaces
long lost to bitter words
and misconceptions, yet
passive movements perpetrate
an audience arresting whispers and
accusations.

The slow, hollow rhythm drains
the bones of warmth, brittle
and without worth, they lay there still.
Lay upon a bed of ash and
desecrated memories forever
ringing out to stitched ears and foreign
eyes.

Lost is the soul that strays
so far from his cocoon,
destined to remain aimless.
Alone with his convictions
decay never parts the side
of one who so desperately
seeks the company of
solitude.

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like the opening line the imagery was amazing and it made me extremely curious as to how you were going to go about writing the rest of the piece. besides pale shadows is an uncommon description and it really stood out. you never let me down in the piece. you kept that curiosity stirring in me and told a wonderful yet heartbreaking story. I really love the style you chose. Great write.