Comments : A Bride To Be

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a lovely gift for a marriage. I hope she finds it as pleasing and beautifully crafted it is with the simple wordings but thought provoking. I love where you said, 'Just yersterday you were a little girl climbing trees'. It shows once upon a time bride-to-be, was a naive minor; now a mature lady in waiting, to tie the knots. Wishing them a life of eternal joy in their marital lives, Ameen ya rabbi. Jazakallahu Khairan. EXQUISITE! l.o.v.e. ;).

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    People can grow up so fast right before your eyes. It happens but it's the beauty of life. I love this poem for its thoughts, and what it means. Awesome

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was very sweet and the 3rd stanza was my fav. it was simple and really pretty :)

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was extremely sweet and well written 5/5. It also had really nice flow and rhythem :)