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by Yakori bint Muhammed Feb 24, 2012
Life, society /
meaning of life
24th February, 2012.
The sparkling sabre
reflects through the imperial
sea, baring my face
to wipe golden tears of wrath,
soaking dry shore of my sins.
by Yakori bint Muhammed
Thanks for your comment, I appreciate loads.. Bless you :-)..
by Ingrid de Klerck
You have a way with words..I will have to reread this a few times more to really grasp at what you were trying to convey...
'golden tears fo wrath', I really like how you worded that.
Well done, excellent poetic language
Thanks LP, I'm grateful.. :-), God bless you.
Yakori, I like this a lot, the colors..the sounds.. the whole set.
Thanks loads Nei, for the comments. I'm still learning so I'm sure the more I read and write, thus, perfecting the craft. I'm grateful. :) ..