Awwww:(May his soul rest in peace

This poem says a lot how innocent souls r dying because of silly things.

Zahra, What has happened in your country and in Syria these last few months is terrible, everytime I see it on the news I pray for the children taken away, there lives innocent.

You really expressed this in your piece, it was heartbreakingly sad, and you really gave me chills while reading this.

God bless you darling

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This is very sad, its awful to thing how a little child can be killed like this, you express those emotions very well here.

May his soul rest in eternal peace and Jan'natul Firdaus be his final abode, Ameen. This is sad poem but written so deep that one can feel the pains revolving within this piece. Its so unfortunate how we find ourselves in such pandemonium in our societies; day in, day out. May the Almighty intervene and help us through this chaotic period, ameen. A brilliant piece, gloomy but crafted with vivid imagery, smooth flow and simple words but very profound in message. Keep up the good work, more wisdom to your gift. Mashallah! Dear, blessings to you. :)

Wow this was a great poem. The way you took that pen with the ink turning it into blood expressing deep emotion from the war. It was very good. Nice write. :)