Comments : Garden of the Night (Terza Rima)

  • 5 years ago

    by Victoria Nojang

    I can feel the pain in depth within the lines, though darkness seems to have stolen away love and all
    hope seems lost, tomorrow comes with bliss.
    wow I love the poem, the power of the words, the gloomy image it portrays and the hope it conveys.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Always such a pleasure to read a poem by you, Luanne:)

    Your formatted poetry is never forced, so cleverly crafted and all words adding to the message.

    Yesterday may shiver leaves brittle with cold
    yet tomorrow brings promise worthy to hold

    ^^
    As long as we are able to have this hope, we will keep on striving to make ourselves and our loved ones a beautiful life:)

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 5 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Luanne,

    Been sometime! This is such a haunting yet enchanting piece you have written. Nicely flowing in the difficult constraints of the form.

    Beautifully penned.

    Warm regards,

    Steven