I can feel the pain in depth within the lines, though darkness seems to have stolen away love and all
hope seems lost, tomorrow comes with bliss.
wow I love the poem, the power of the words, the gloomy image it portrays and the hope it conveys.

Always such a pleasure to read a poem by you, Luanne:)

Your formatted poetry is never forced, so cleverly crafted and all words adding to the message.

Yesterday may shiver leaves brittle with cold
yet tomorrow brings promise worthy to hold

^^
As long as we are able to have this hope, we will keep on striving to make ourselves and our loved ones a beautiful life:)

Well done!

5/5 Ingrid

Luanne,

Been sometime! This is such a haunting yet enchanting piece you have written. Nicely flowing in the difficult constraints of the form.

Beautifully penned.

Warm regards,

Steven