Comments : Future

  • 5 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Time shall define Nature by Change.. I hope u get over this fantasy real quick!?

  • 5 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Aww this is sad! :[
    but sweet at the same time

    good job!

    5/5 :]

  • 5 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Wow great job, i really can relate to that and the self doubt of being in love

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    But she has proven that she is the best
    Piece by piece she has me and my heart lured

    I loved this part of the poem, it really put it together well, piece by piece, thats what it takes.... iy canyt be fixed in a second ..but it would be cool it if could but thats life, I like this poem, nice workk@