Comments : Forgotten Memories

  • 12 years ago

    by Reaper

    Very sad :( but wrote it beautifully!

  • 12 years ago

    by HvN

    The 2nd verse is beautifully written and holds such pristine meaning that it evoked tears to fall from my eyes before I could stop them. As for a title, might I make a suggestion? How about "Forgotten Memories" to signify the lost of memories one had before a tragic time and or happening occurred, a time that was once lively and happy. Anyway beautiful poem Nik, 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Full of emotions. Words coming from a bleeding heart. Could feel pain from every single word. Very nicely expressed.

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Nella

    So i thing i didn't do was cry profusely... i felt every single word!!! excellent work