Hours Before

by Maple Tree   Mar 25, 2012


Two sisters sang
a melody
so breathtaking,
that It knocked
me senseless,
and led me Into
your loving arms.

I remember
the day well,
snow blanketed
frozen grass,
as I danced around,
primping my nervousness.

Our fist date
had a pounding beat,
such as the drum solo
within that song,
the one the sisters
sang,
that led me straight to you....

Note: The poem Is about the day I was getting ready for my very first date with my now husband.

The song that played that day, and that I'm referring to
is: "Straight On" by Heart

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh my this is so sweet and so personal. I love it. I think it is beautiful and it made butterflies in my stomach thinking of first dates lol.

    Awesome write hun. Simply beautiful.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    This is so sweet ! : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Andrea, OMG, I like the song... and I was really taken away in the second read after seeing your footnote..

    I remember
    the day well,
    snow blanketed
    frozen grass,
    as I danced around,
    primping my nervousness.

    ^ lol I can see you here, with your nervousness and maybe biting your lips, checking everytime if it was the wind outside or He...

    You and James look cute here, even though he is not in the picture specifically :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Thats soooo cute:)
    I love this poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    They say girls are super nervous going on a first date..wow I remember when I first ask a girl out ..I think for days I tried on everything in my closet, hoping for the macho look, or the sensitive look, settled on the God help me look
    Loved this, brought back memories

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