Buried Treasure

by E Dacaf   Mar 29, 2012


Once held dear, I dazzled brightly.
Over many hands I slowly faded.
Even brightest jewels wont shine,
With dirt upon their hides.
Forget me in the sand,
bury me in empathy.
I am buried treasure.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Definitely sad poem...but a good one at that congrats on the win.... :) its very deep in a short poem.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Congrats on the one, that is truly one great piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I agree there is a certain appeal to this free verse, seemingly simple. It could do better with some grammatical revisions. Congratulations.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Congratulations on a well deserved win-

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Such a powerful message within this small piece- much enjoyed-

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