This is so sad..
Very beautiful and full of emotion 5/5
Keep writing!

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Wow this is great. i love poems that are repetirive like this. its great :)

Awww :/

5/5

Woaah amazing write!

so sad and yet strong and the same time
i enjoyed reading it

right up my allley!

keep writing!

This was a great read. The flow was spot on and I love the style of the poem. 5/5