Yuck, losing friends is a terrible thing to go through, I know the heart break. This poem I think would be better though if you vented. Dont focus so much on rhyming, take your anger and you sadness and just write...
Very relateable poem hun, we've all been through this
I really love this poem. It's so well written and I can tell you wrote it from your heart :) Keep up the good work!
6 years ago
This is a good poem, especially on the emotional I'm venting type of scale. It makes a point and it shows who you sort of are. As someone before said, this piece is relatable, and yes, it is. Great job. Nice piece. Word choice could have been stronger here and there, but otherwise great. I love how your voice stands out and really makes this piece yours.
4/5 cause its common and words are slightly bland.