Comments : Lord's Church

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Hallelujah, Amen to that. I am speechless.
    This is an excellent piece, wow

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Amazing piece. So uplifting and inspirational. The rhymes flowed rather well, and doesn't seem too forced. I love the simple imagery and word choice. Just some minor errors I spotted:
    "Smiles upon our faces
    Feeling God's embraces"--embrace is a mass noun, therefore, change embraces (which is a verb) to embrace.
    "You are so strong
    Satin is so wrong"--satin is a type of cloth, should be 'Satan'
    Overall, a very beautiful piece. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)
    -X

  • 5 years ago

    by Marvellous

    A new day has darned in your wrights, I can truly concor.. Simply put, you unravelled a marvel here.. Bravo!