The Future Love Of You And Me

by La Reina De Corazones   May 10, 2012


This Poem is for me only!

With this band I promise to love you,
With this heart I promise to forever be loyal,
With this soul I will always be yours,

Skin to skin,
Heart to heart,
Soul to soul,
We eternally promise to bind ourselves to each other

As the years pass by I will not say I regret anything,
This time I will always stay by your side no matter what's the outcome,
Because I love you I will forever linger by your side forever,

Our daughter proud to call us mom and dad,
Seeing us still in love like that once ago day.
Brimming from the love that pours out from us,
And into her capable hands

I love you and I will never stop
You have me forever and ever
Don't forget I will always be there through thick and then
And you know the reason behind all this love
It's because you and I were meant to be!

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  • 11 years ago

    by PrinceLawrence

    Positive outlook, A pure romantic indeed..
    great writings..
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    True love, so sweet. <3 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Nice poem
    i like it a lot
    have many emotions
    powerful emotion all the way through the poem till the ending line
    flow was good
    word choice was nice too
    some grammar mistakes like
    "Our daughter proud to call us mom and dad,"
    u should say "Our daughter is proud"

    "Seeing us still in love like that once ago day."
    this line wasnt flowing as well as the rest of the poem

    I suggest u change it to
    "Seeing us still in love like that day ago."
    flowing better for me like that

    other than this i love this poem a lot
    but to be honest i can expect what u are writing
    "as somebody told me be4" makes it a bit boring to read as u dont change the image you try to show a lot
    i think you should try new style to write in and look for new images and so

    still good piece
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Josh just read it, he thinks it's a good poem, it's a miracle, lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The assurances you give to your loved one are warm and real. I would suggest you put some commas especially the first stanza so that the poem flows better. Good work lav

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