This is good, fine words youve chosen here, lovely. Im impressed with the whole structure of the poem, like a verse of some sad love song, then I read the note thing below. Great, really great. I like that singer too btw, uh, that was irrelevant lol, nevermind. :D

Wow fantastic write. I loved the flow and rythym. Keep up the great work.

Peace and love, Joe

Wow fantastic write. I loved the flow and rythym. Keep up the great work.

Peace and love, Joe