Hannah this poem is lovely in the fact that the images are so beautiful and the dedication to your mum is so sweet. I read the poem and was loving the descriptions of everything but the note at the end saddened me :( Awesome poem though!

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God bless her soul ...
I liked ur work simple but emotional
good work5/5...:)

Nice done. this is a beautiful poem and I was touch that this poem was dedicated to your mom.
Well-penned:)

A very beautiful poem, but sad. May her soul rest in perfect peace.

WAW AWESOME

Wow,hannah..its so perfectly written for your mother..
And fr sure she is proud of u..

IT IS NICE ONE

Aww this is heartbreakingly beautiful!
A perfect tribute to your mother may she rest in peace.

5/5