by La Reina De Corazones May 15, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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She lays upon those fallen broken wings and yet not even that brings her joy, |
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"Dying inside but with a smile"....oh, how that line touched me! I enjoyed this piece - just one very, very minor constructive feedback, sometimes the word phrasing gets a little confusing (maybe its just to me), but it definitely doesn't detract the poem's beauty! |
by Silent Girl
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Very well written poem :) 5/5 |
by Cardwell
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This is so very beautiful! |
by Illusion
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This is unique and beautifully written.. |
by Georgia
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Oh wow, this is amazing !! Unique and amazingly written 500/5 ;) x |