Comments : How Would It Be?

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem seemed to have given me chills. I loved the read, it was filled with such emotion and It seemed to have great meaning to me.

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    This poem makes me sad. I am sorry if this happened and I am glad that you did not take your life (if this is true).

    This is a very raw poem, one of the rawest that I have read. I feel like it is a sort of "revenge" poem as well because you were angry at somebody that you knew for not noticing that you were in pain.

    The last stanza is completely true-I agree with you wholeheartedly. It seems that in a time of great pressure or great sadness people fully reveal themselves.

    Awesome poem (and I am sorry)
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by always the same

    Unfortunately, I did go through it, but I'm here and I'm still smiling and I'm okay now.
    Thank you so much!

  • 11 years ago

    by always the same

    Unfortunately, I did go through it, but I'm here and I'm still smiling and I'm okay now.
    Thank you so much!