This is a wonderful, wonderful poem that is written by a very caring, thoughtful and loving person.
Your poem is beautiful Little Mermaid, and your command of English is very good indeed!
I am so pleased that you continued your writing, your piece here does you much credit.
This is a beautiful poem. God bless you always.
5 years ago
by average thoughts
This poem is a grt piece for al those innocent kids
Thank u for the comment...m happy that u liked my poem..i tried my best to jot down what i saw n felt that time.it was so hard for me to control my tears when i saw those children n their pitiful condition.