Time to burn

This poem has a dark feeling to it.. Gave me chills.
Great rhyme though in places it seeme SLIGHTLY forced but the flow was still really great.

Also a few minor spelling errors throughout.

Other than that... Amazing write!
A well deserved 5/5

"This sin has been cast
and demonds I pass
will snarle and they'll laugh
for they've lent my mast"

^I think "demonds" should be demons.

"as I fight for one day
i'm well on my way
how can they truley say
that i'm only a stray"

^"truley" should be truly.

"I banish me so
yet true-love and friends go
for they're not to know
how this lonley path flows"

^"lonley" should be lonely.

just a few typos, nothing major. overall, a good poem! 5/5

Trust me wen ah say....u don't wanna go to hell.

A great oneI think I 've got the msg of confrontation and challenge from it a welldone poem soo powerfull keep it rocking 5/5 :)

I love the flow of this poem i'm getting chill's reading this poem 5/5