Comments : Imagining..?

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I think this is about a marriage that is failing, that might end in a divorce if they don't try to mend it.
    Great write; only thing I see is in the title it says "Inagining...?" I think it should be "Imagining...?" Not sure, just thought I'd bring it up, lol.

  • Yes about my parents marriage. Its still rocky and unsure but holding together for now.

    My bad. Will fix that up now. Thanks. lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    It's so very sad when two people who were in love grow apart and in most cases eventually live apart. Sigh!

    I seen it happen so many times, in my own family, amongst my friends. I hope that in your case that your parents have mended and it's holding up.

    This was very cleverly written from a third person point of view showing the reader what was going on thoughout the write.

    Well done!