Oh MY!!!

What a poem! I mean the first two lines were so direct... don't ask me!

I love that because it shows that you are feeling differently about this relationship than the other person does. Maybe they haven't gotten over it and you have.

I love what you were trying to tell this person and how you were doing it. The images were great and the sadness in the words blew me away.

LOVED IT

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Great one, Meme. I like how you made use of the names of poetry forms. It was kind of romantic, yet with the melancholic atmosphere that your tone has induced, it was far more than plain romance.

Awesome, my friend:)

Wow.... I love this poem... I love the imagery you created and the whole meaning behind this poem.

I love this part I must say "or even to carve a sonnet on your lonely pavements." It's my favorite part of this poem!

Amazing poem! Well done! :)