i appreciate your poem.
i know how it feels to be broken,
so i rate it as excellent.
for it touches my felling
of how carma rush on me
and break my heart.
and that carma was my first and previous
and one great love. it's a very long dramatic story, that reflects in your poems..
but beside from those heart aches, i still be loving him, and that love pushes me to make the poem in titled "you are my forever"..