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by Ole Carsten Aug 16, 2012
Love, romance /
Love is holding its hand under me
Shielding my true heart for me
I am longing to hand all to you
My love is telling me what to do
Strong passions is dancing in my mind
I have searched the world and know where to find
A shelter so perfect and everlasting
Once I feared every one of your temperaments blasting
Now I know it is emotions screaming for love
Blessings sent for me from the angel above
Angel spread your wide wings and lift me on my way
You know where I have been and forever stay
Soon your duties and deeds are done
Your time is over and you are back where you begun
My angel you are free to love again
You have carried me to my love without a stain
We invite you a last time
Come and hear the bells chime
Bring your loved one with you
That is what we will beg you to do
by Odin Ebbesen
Oh:) a wedding in this poem? a new twist
by Dagmar Wilson
This is sad and written so elegantly.
What a beautiful love poem.
First I love the rhyming in this poem
it gives a nice ring and goes well with the flow
"Love is holding its hand under me
Shielding my true heart for me"
I like these 2 lines specially the part "true heart"
made me feel like u had another heart maybe as a camouflage or a first defense line to keep your real heart running and love was your 2nd defense
U had a few mistakes like in
"Now I know it is emotions scream for love
Blessings send for me from the angel above"
scream-- screaming ( tho I am not sure if u mean to use scream as noun or verb)
"Angel spread your wide wings and lifts me on my way
You know where I have be and forever stay"
be---beenover all this is an interesting piece
good read =)