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First I love the rhyming in this poem
it gives a nice ring and goes well with the flow
"Love is holding its hand under me
Shielding my true heart for me"
I like these 2 lines specially the part "true heart"
made me feel like u had another heart maybe as a camouflage or a first defense line to keep your real heart running and love was your 2nd defense
U had a few mistakes like in
"Now I know it is emotions scream for love
Blessings send for me from the angel above"
scream-- screaming ( tho I am not sure if u mean to use scream as noun or verb)
"Angel spread your wide wings and lifts me on my way
You know where I have be and forever stay"
be---beenover all this is an interesting piece
good read =)
by Dagmar Wilson
This is sad and written so elegantly.
What a beautiful love poem.
by Odin Ebbesen
Oh:) a wedding in this poem? a new twist