Comments : Truth In a Masquerade [Prose]

  • 6 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    You're a hero to the coward and a jailer to the hero. And it's ironic how you can be humbly hypocritical.

    Oh me, Oh my, you are not on the same level as we are when it comes to poetry
    I'm going to edit this comment and go in depth later.
    Honestly Awe-struck
    And I think u should be more active,
    people need to read this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Nema, my word! There is so much I love about this!!...Im in love with the paragraphed statements and then how you follow up with a question, making the person this is directed to and the readers think about what you just previously said...loved that!

    I really cant pick a part this poem, no one can change it, it seems like you wrote from frustration and just laid out every emotion you were feeling about the situation...

    and God this

    you're a hero to the coward and a jailer to the hero

    ^ EPIC...seriously, most amazing statement I have read in an incredibly long time..

    Well done, I am in love with this

    But I have to tell you, my favorite lines were

    It seems so hard to breathe in your space, yet you choke me as if I'm accused of infidelity

    fed a whole masquerade with masks beneath masks, until the possibility of truth has become a delusion to those who made their own disguise the truth.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    I don't think it would, dear Nema, it would most probably kill all.

    Thank God for masquerades to hide the hideous face of truth.

    Long time no see, sweet girl<3

    well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Awesome write, very powerful and really well written. There aren't many words to describe this besides mesmerizing from beginning to end as well as perfect in the flow, the wording, the emotions felt throughout the poem. Great work, I really enjoyed it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Truely beautiful