*shivers slightly* this was downright SCARY to me and i LOVE dark poetry so this AWESOME!!! i can just imagine the girl is sick and stinking tired of the husband's lack of control with his endless drinking and she's fed up and takes her fun i gotta wow you are soo gonna end up in my favorite poems/authors list!!! 5/5

Ashlin

Great job I love dark poems they are raw & real.5/5
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Woe. very creative and detailed, felt like I was in th room with you.