Goodnight

So much has already been said about this piece so I will simply let it be known that I usually hate reading pieces in the sad category, but my friend urged me to read this one, and she was right, it is gorgeously penned.

This piece is beautiful, it leaves such an impact and the simplicity really helps make the piece even more stunning. I love the way you wrote this so that it oozes sorrow and the pain of missing someone without making it so unbearable that the piece is ruined or tainted. Great job with your imagery and vivid creation of each memory.

I really love this piece.

Amazing write.

Strong piece..

I loved reading this poem, the first stanza caught mystifying right away. (:

Aww... this is such a heartbreaking yet romantic poem.

The simplicity of your words were refreshing, and your imagery was lovely.

I love how you described her eyes as 'sapphire' it's my birthstone so I love sapphire! I imagined a beautiful girl that you love or loved very much.

I like the cupid's lullaby part.. I feel it would be really mellow and nice to hear.

Great poem!