by Hellon
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Hey....this is a nice poem...it's short, but you get the meaning across really well in your few lines and....sometimes less is more if you know what I mean? Just a couple of things for you to consider please?.. |
by Naughtymouse
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Love Love Love it ....enough said :-) |
by Darren
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1 nit, second line stanza 2 should be 'too' rather than 'to' |
by Chelsey
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I really enjoyed your analogy here. Love can always compared to like a blossoming flower and when it ends, like a wilting one. Ive always loved when that analogy is used.. |
by Autuumnbree
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Nice short poem I like that you use a flower to describe how love grows and sometime wither. Nice one |
by Lofallenve
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This poem is so beautiful. <3 |