Okay...I am not a fan of love poems, maybe it's because I find myself missing certain people when I know I shouldn't...this reminded me of someone I'd rather forget but saying that, you told a story with your words and I like that...how transported I became to past times...

The rhymes were not always smooth and the flow maybe wasn't at it's peak throughout but still this piece was an enjoyment to read.

xx

Lovely words nice written

This is cute and from the heart. You told your tale as if it was just yesterday, so real and memorable. Such first moments are never forgotten. One can move on with another person entirely different but first dates will always be in ones buried heart.

They feel like a fantasy, full of wishes, skeptic periods but sure its he or she, no doubt about that. The innocence is well delivered without any hindrance.

A well written narration, not very lyrical but a worthwhile read indefinitely. Lovely!

Well wow well!!! This is one of the best poems I've eva read!!! It feels like this poem is written for me...! Wink!lol
I'd the same feeling like you have put it in these lines... "There was a twinkle, in your eyes,

far greater than the stars at night,

at the sight, my heart jumped out my chest

I wondered if you ever noticed-
but it was then I knew
you were more special than the rest.

Did you know how I felt when we held hands

or when I accidentally gave you a kiss?

Scared at first, but then you gave a smile

I knew this first date would be worthwhile."

Uh! I don't think u were there spying my first date with my gal??? Haha...
Nice poem, dude!lol
5/5