Comments : Come back one day

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    These are just a bunch of your thoughts right now Dixie and...you have the potential to make it into a poem....just edit a lot of it....I don't need all the I's for example for I know it's personal...it doesn't need to rhyme..just read it over please.....like I said...it already has potential...

  • 6 years ago

    by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit

    Thank you for the comment. Let me modify that one.. But you didn't rate it (huhu)

  • 6 years ago

    by Marvellous

    If it bleeds on, it's a far fetch. Behind all 'goodbye', there's 'welcome'. Things go wrong, to turn good at last.